by Amber Jan 24, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
On this day I give to you, |
by Luke
This Is A Good Poem.. Not Too Long.. But It Works.. Well done. |
5/5 Really excellent is what my heart speaks after these soulful words. Especially the first two lines were a perfect start to this wondeful work of yours. My favourite lines are 7-9, but I also like the end which is meaningful and still you got to the point with your elegant style of writing. |