Emptiness

A lonely heart
it shares no pain
it has nothing
to believe in.
When you look inside
to find the reason
you will see
there's nothing there.

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18 years ago
by Biscuit

Simple and effective, a lot of emotions crammed in here, i like it xx
18 years ago
by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

Very short, very clean; I loved it. Great job.... Nothing to really say about this.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5
18 years ago
by David Moss

The ending was a let-down - but that's meant as a good thing, it sums the message up nicely. Good writing, -DM
18 years ago
by Natalie

This was short, But pretty good. You could try and add a little more to it. Make it more in depth. But I did like it how it is. 5/5

`Taleee. xx.