This was short, But pretty good. You could try and add a little more to it. Make it more in depth. But I did like it how it is. 5/5

`Taleee. xx.

The ending was a let-down - but that's meant as a good thing, it sums the message up nicely. Good writing, -DM

Very short, very clean; I loved it. Great job.... Nothing to really say about this.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

Simple and effective, a lot of emotions crammed in here, i like it xx