Yea this poem is true she realy messed me up, but now she is no one im glad you got away from this freind, and thanks for the comments:-]

this was a good poem, it must have been hard for you to write about such a hard time you went through. At least you've got friends like Sharon above, well done, K

great poem, sorry that this happened to u, i know how you feel, its good that you can write about it!
jemma

Thanks, that was the worst time of my life, but I have broken free now, and I truely respect myself more,
I was a buly then because she told me to be, I am now trying my best to make it up to the people I bullied who are now some of my closest freinds, I know I can never truely be forgiven But I am trying.
Thanks for youe coment I realy apreciate them.

hey Jo...
I like your style of writing. I have been rhyming in my poems and want to write some poems without rhyming. I really like this poem! i am so sorry that this had to happen to you. I used to be bullied around awhile ago, but now they are scarred of me. im glad you got away!!! GREAT POEM!
ashley b

THAT WAS REALLY GOOD I THINK YOU WILL GO FAR IN WRITING POETRY

WOW UR A GREAT POET AND I FEEL THIS ONE TOO MY BEST FRIEND WENT THROUGH THAT TO!!!

Really good poem! I could feel you and feel how you felt. I'm so sorry. I think poems are good when they touch me and even when I don't know how that feels, the poem can make me feel it. That's what your poem did...great job! I liked it!! I'm sorry that happened too! Gosh...I'm so sorry!! If you wanna talk, e-mail me at ismene86@comcast.net and then I could give you my AIM sn and my MSN sn. lol.
Luv,
Amy