Fading

by RainbowDemon RogueDoll   Jan 24, 2006


With a broken heart
Tears slide down her face
A razor swipes her cheek and wrists
Leaving 4 bloody gouges
Etched onto her cheeks
Blood, mingled with tears
Splatters the pure white carpet
Hatred fills her heart
Scissors swing into the mirror
Smashing it into a thousand fragments
Creeping up with no warning
Her world shatters into a million pieces
Her fragile body collapses
Surrounded by a tear
A tear lost of all hope...

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  • 18 years ago

    by Jeffrey

    Creates a very destructive and vivid scene between the exploding mirror and the white bloodstained carpet.

    strong stuff Peta

  • 18 years ago

    by Arcane Blondie

    Really emotional and it flowed very well-wonderful!...yet very sad and deep 5/5
    great job-keep it up

  • 18 years ago

    by t. h a l l i d a y *

    Very deep and full of emotion i loved it ... really good 5/5

    xox pixie

  • 18 years ago

    by RainbowDemon RogueDoll

    Heya Sparra!! yer i do have msn... my addy is
    sex_kitten_006@hotmail.com
    and
    outrageously_bad@hotmail.com
    ttyl kk mwa

  • 18 years ago

    by RadianceInReverse

    I really Liked this one...Nice word usage..Thanks for all the comments...TTYL JOC

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