by Olliver Kahle Jan 24, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Another day, another chance to change. But I cannot seem to make a change, |
Long with little structure but there's a flow that's kinda like a story. The content was good and the word choice was great. Other than the structure and length it was interesting for what it contained. |
I agree it was too long and not much structure I guess, but I kinda was writing it and it's not relly a poem just a short text I guess. |
Though the form and structure are not great the contenct and your descriptions more than make up for this. |
by Fay
Good poem but a little too long |