So deep i drown

by bella   Jan 24, 2006


I live in the darkness of my own personal abyss
Staring out at nothing, trying to use my minds eye
Blind to the world around me and invisible to them
Existence a punishment, a fate worse than death.

Try to grasp the little that remains, it slips away
Wish I could show you what I see and
why I pretend to care but apathy reigns

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  • 17 years ago

    by ganjaru

    A good one!
    i liked it very much!^^

  • 18 years ago

    by Sorefromreality

    Thats an awesome poem. i love it. u r an amazing poet w/ a broad range of vocab bravo! could u comment on some of mine if u hav the time?

  • 18 years ago

    by master of shadow

    You express yourself brilliantly in this peice. well done

    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Fay

    Gr8 poem