So Right

by Bill Turner   Jan 24, 2006


Love light filling your eyes
Radiating from deep within
Your breathing and sighs
Kiss and touch leading to a grin

Young body so hot and free
Firmly holding you in my hand
As you give your love to me
Taking you with passion grand

We spend our nights like this
Desire burning deep inside
Starting with a simple kiss
Ending in a wild, nasty ride

As I hold you this night
Feeling your hand upon my chest
My world is so right
Knowing that you give my soul rest

There is more to this than a soul kiss
A feeling burning deep within my heart
Craving you and feeling amiss
Whenever I find that we are apart

I want to be next to you
Kissing you through the night
Passion burning in all we do
Together, it feels so right

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  • 18 years ago

    by Amanda Bee

    Ooooo. That was hot. Very, very nice job there Bill. I loved the images you described. Especially this part:
    As I hold you this night
    Feeling your hand upon my chest
    My world is so right
    Knowing that you give my soul rest

    Loved it:)

  • 18 years ago

    by Phoebe

    Great ^^

  • 18 years ago

    by Lost Soul 691

    Very peaceful loving feeling came over me while reading. Great job!

  • 18 years ago

    by .ღ.Jasmyn.ღ.

    Very passionate!

    Beautiful work.

    --Jasmyn

  • 18 years ago

    by AnAstAciA

    This poem is beautiful...i love it...you know where to put the right word in the right situation:) goooooood job:) 5/5
    *Pls check mine and tell me what you think:)

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