Beautiful sunsets

by Tiny Reader   Jan 24, 2006


Beautiful sunsets that we cannot see,
Because of this distance between you and me.
Problems arising through nightmares we share,
Anxiously waiting for you to be there.

Longing to hold on to the things that we plan,
Praying for loves angels to lend us a hand.
Feelings still strong, it hurts to let go,
So we'll try to hang on, and take things slow.

And when you return, we'll try not to rush,
Eventually we'll learn and regain our trust.
Until that time, I'll think and I'll smile
Knowing our love is still worthwhile.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Loulou

    This is sweet. I like this poem and how it looks different in the stanzas then your other ones i have read so far.

  • 18 years ago

    by Lady Vengeance

    Really really beautiful. i loved it start to finish. well done

  • 18 years ago

    by Eibutsina

    Feels as though its missing something, lacks depth...I think love poems should be deeply well thought out expressions but again this seems typical of the aabb rhyming schemes you see so frequently on here...you shold have stretched the emphasis on the sunset a lil more...used better imagery...still nice poem all the same.

  • 18 years ago

    by LockedInEternity

    @...wow...the rhythm was amazing, the flow was perfect and it was beautiful overall....i honestly loved it:):) 5/5...@

  • 18 years ago

    by Nelle

    It was good, i really liked it!! Soo sweet..i have had that feeling before, so i know what you mean!! Great job!

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