by Loulou
It is a good poem |
This si a good peice. i very rarly read love poems but i like this one. |
Thats was very good very sweet poem your very talented 5/5 |
by Ali
Lovely Poem I cant give anything less than a 5!!!! Keep writing! |
by Allison
That was beautiful. Keep up the good work. You are really talented. *5/5* |
by Samantha
Nicely done. I really loved your poem... It is absoultly flawless and just simply beautiful... It flowed nice and the grammer is the best I've seen in a long time! This poem definelty deserves a five.. Keep it up |
by pebbles
So gud. ill give it a 5. its really reminds me of there really mean it. keep it up! |
by LuvMeAlwayz
Awesome poem !! |
by Lovely Bones
Oh I really like this. It has such emotion. You have a great way with words.. I look forward to reading more of your stuff! |
This poem is amazingly beautiful. I love it, the rhyming is great. And I love the message, it's so sincere. |
by Dre4meR
Beautifully Written I must say...I love the flow of it...It was amazing |
Praying for loves angels to lend us a hand. |
by Nelle
It was good, i really liked it!! Soo sweet..i have had that feeling before, so i know what you mean!! Great job! |
@...wow...the rhythm was amazing, the flow was perfect and it was beautiful overall....i honestly loved it:):) 5/5...@ |
by Eibutsina
Feels as though its missing something, lacks depth...I think love poems should be deeply well thought out expressions but again this seems typical of the aabb rhyming schemes you see so frequently on here...you shold have stretched the emphasis on the sunset a lil more...used better imagery...still nice poem all the same. |
Really really beautiful. i loved it start to finish. well done |
by Loulou
This is sweet. I like this poem and how it looks different in the stanzas then your other ones i have read so far. |