Comments : What should I do now

  • 18 years ago

    by jess

    Awww hun. great poem. hope things get bettter for you!
    love ya xxxxxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by PassionatelyMarla

    Hiya,, hey dont worry so much,, (how am i to say,, i must be in my happy highs) but talking about it is good,, and its not ur fault u cut,, coz if u it was,, u would have had the choice to stop,, so there,, hope u will do better soon,,
    lots of lovin,,
    **doz an1c me**

  • 18 years ago

    by Just Sierra

    Oy...so i'm taking it that no one took it well at all???

    oy...i'm so sorry....

    I can tell though, with this poem, that you're really feeling a lot because you had an incredible rhythm and rhyme scheme going for you..then you just...lost it....kinda weird, but i can understand....

    Great job!!

    I'm so sorry that all this is happening to you!
    VERY sorry!!

    But i wish you tons of great luck!

  • 18 years ago

    by InvisibleGurl

    Hey Rach!
    Yet another great poem. Envy your writing gurl!! Tells a great story.
    Hope everything gets better!
    Love ya lots,
    xoxo,
    Laterz
    Shirlz

  • 18 years ago

    by PassionatelyMarla

    Hey girls,, u must post more poems,, so that i can comment,, lol,, ok bye,, hope to see more,, laters,,
    lots of lovin,,
    **doz an1c me**