Very nice job... your poem is well written and well expresses your views... keep it up

sammie

I've read a couple of your poems, although this is the only one I will comment on. I see a painful, heartbreaking theme in your works, and I think it's good you can find some peace in writing. I'm going through a tough time regarding matters of the heart right now too, so I can somewhat relate.
I really liked this poem, the simplicity works well. At some point everyone has said "if only," it's a common phrase. I really felt the emotion in this write, just like your others. Well done, keep writing. I think on your road of healing you've found a talent.

Very good peice, the words "if only" are used a lot so are very easy for people to relate to. this peice is very welll written and contains a lot of truth.

5/5

If only your poem would go on longer lol I really liked it : ) Good job

Whoa. i could never have put this point into words like u just did. wonderful, wonderful writing skills. makes me realize alot, ya know. 5/5.

Theres truth in this poem, and thats what i like in it. well done.

Thats awesome! 5/5 =] It's all so true!
Great job!!

- natz x-x

James, thanks for spotting the error.

J. Lau

Awesome poem!

Oh so very true this Poem is. I loved it. I am sure alot can relate to it. keep up the good work.

Awesome poem, once again - hooked the reader - and it's so true, what is love without it's temporary mishaps?

Peace. [Sole]

Very nicely written! great work!

Simple: But it works for you in this poem. The emotions are real and you can feel it coming through the words and getting to the reader. The words are addicting and help the reader continue. Though love poems tend to be cliche, this one focused more on recognizing than losing love.
I suggest maybe taking the it out of some of the sentences, it really doesn't seem needed.

I really like the way that you ended it. it gave it a nice effect. The repetiton of If Only love really held up well, much better than most repetition poems. This was great!

Very nice. Attention grabbing, good flow and rhythme. I adored this poem of yours and really enjoyed reading it. People often say 'If only'. I hear and say it all the time.

Very nice. Attention grabbing, good flow and rhythme. I adored this poem of yours and really enjoyed reading it. People often say 'If only'. I hear and say it all the time.

Soo many people can relate to this poem .. it was really just a beautiful poem

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~!*Meaghen~!*

Wow...I like the contrast and irony in the lines. It leaves you thinking about the power of love. Superb!

[lost_laureate]

Soo true!! I loved the was this one was written. It was very simple, but that makes the poem more enjoyable to read. The flow was good as usual. Great job!

Cayce x

This ALSO was different, in a way, but is was rather good. It is well written and has a good meaning to it. Awesome job. You are a good writer. Keep it up. 5/5

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