I swere you got some Great Talent...Awesome Job 5/5

That was a great poem. it rhymed where it was supposed to and when it didnt the flow was sooo good that it didnt need to rhyme. good poem. can't wait to see II and III!!! 5/5

You really have talent
keep writing

Don't be scared to love. It's one of the best parts of life. Excellently written!