Please Listen

by Crator   Jan 24, 2006


I need help
Why are you so blind as to not see?
Nobody notices me as I cry on the inside

Even my friends
The few I have won't take notice of my pain

They just shrug off my screams and call me a weirdo
I'm not a weirdo I just want help
But I am having a hard time saying it vocally
Maybe you will notice words?

So will you please hear me and help me?...

Please...

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  • 18 years ago

    by AmAnDa NiChOlS

    Very deep and you obviously need someone to be there. i can relate because i am feeling the same way, only i hide it from everyone. my poems are my only way of expressing my feelings. if you dont mind, check out my 2 latest poems and comment, let me know what you think. i would really appreciate the feedback. they are called "RESISTING THE BLADE" and "I AM NOT ALONE" and by the way....if you want to talk please please feel free to send me a private message, or even an e-mail if you would like. as i said, i am in a similar situation and i know how it feels to have so much to say and nobody to listen. so please feel free!! xoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by Absolute Broken Perfection

    I think it is really nice, and it definetly shows that you are calling for help, but no one can even here you, i no how you feel, you arent alone.

  • 18 years ago

    by cuttingsherpleasuredeathishergame

    I understand what ur goin through (if this poem is true) i will help, we can help each other. 5/5
    check out my poems/quotes

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