Usually I don't like these types of 'prose' poems, but this one is different. The format can sometimes make them difficult to read, but with rhyme and a fairly consistent flow, it works well. Nice work

~*Really good can relate 2 alot, well hope ur doing good theses days...5/5*~XoXo

Excellent job, it relates to me!

I'm not used to the format and it made the sentences feel off. But the word choice in itself was well beautiful. The ending held power and emotions. I just was taken aback at first of the format.

Execellent job.