Very touching, and well written...sepecially for your age. you have a way with words. i am very sorry to hear about your loss but just remember that you are never alone and that he is still with you. i wish you the best! i also just wrote 2 new poems and if you dont mind i would like for you to read them and leave a comment and let me know what you think. they are called "resisting the blade" and "i am not alone" keep writing..i look forward to reading more of your work

= ( i know how u feel and i know how hard it is...great poem :) its good to write down how u feel xxx
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