by Angie Jan 25, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Sadness swells and fills my heart, |
I think brake's should be breaks. but same thing people will still get the beautiful picture you have written here. Great and Amazing poem! 5/5 |
by Jenni Marie
Another one that i really enjoyed. And another 5/5 |
by Fallen~Tears
I think so far this is my favorite poem of yours.. out of the last 3.. another great poem.. i really thought the last line put a good effect on it.. even thought the rhyming scheme switched it still flowed nicely great job 5/5 |
I didn't enjoy it...I felt it.... |
Full of emotion...but very well written!..5/5! |