If i would have changed
by shawn hoskins Jan 25, 2006
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Were would i be if i would have changed my ways, things would be different and i would look forward to the day, i know if i could go back there would be many things i would change, things would be so different and i wouldn't be feeling this shame, time they say can heal all wounds, but i'm running out of time in this life i've left in ruins. |
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16 years ago
by victoria
I love this poem.Very well written.
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17 years ago
by stefanie
I can relate to this one. i think thats why i like it so much. great job. you have a way with words. its a great poem. and thank you for the comments
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18 years ago
by Bridgette
Wow this is really good. very thought provoking about where you would be if you had of done something different. This is something probably everyone can relate to. Great job! 5/5**
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18 years ago
This was really fantastic. Perhaps try arranging it so each clause is on one line and it take on more a poems format...makes it a bit easier to read and makes the rhyme more compelling. Still nicely done...
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18 years ago
This poems looks pretty good. and i really understand what you're trying to say. keep ur head up and peace out!
