This is some good stuff athan, one of ur best so far

Damn I felt that one boy, good job!!!

Excellent poem 5/5

Wow, This is a really good poem and I can really feel the emotion in it. Is it true? If so, keep your head up, one day a girl will truly appreciate all you do and won't do all that stuff she did to you. The right one is out there for you. Great job, I give it a 5/5

This is a good poem.. nice job. i liked it.. and i'm really sorry if this happened.