Excommunicated

by Grotesque Angel   Jan 25, 2006


Lost and taken from my sight,
Is where my darling lies,
I hope soon to see her face,
Before my bloodshot eyes

I wish that the last word of mine,
Had been something nice,
Instead of talking on a line,
Displaying her worst vice

I love her every way I can,
For she is such an angel,
I know she wont love another man,
For she is my loved angel

This time apart is soon to end,
Time together to begin,
For all the time in this world,
With you I would spend

© Copyright 2006 By: Grotesque Angel

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  • 17 years ago

    by Michelle18

    Awwwww! i really like this one. your a great writer.

  • 18 years ago

    by Wings Of Flames

    I agree, very nice and heart felt
    sorry i hadnt commented sooner
    anyways,
    ~em

  • 18 years ago

    by Ariana

    This is really nice and sincere, I enjoyed it, it's quite unique and different to what much of the other love poems I've read, I like your style of writing. Keep it up :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Lady Vengeance

    Yes, yes. i liked it. i was so close to getting out of commenitng on ur poems... 8 TIMES! i guess this is karma or whatever it's called. well i thought it was pretty good. you've written better. but still good.

  • 18 years ago

    by Cueball24

    Nice. Very good work. I really like it. You my friend have talent.

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