Hey Sweetness this poem is so amazing, I cant believe how good it is. Is it your first poem on this site? Either way, wow!!1 Great job. It flows so well when read out loud. Loved it, and Please keep writtin dont just fade away and never return to this site, cus Im dying to read more of ur stuff...

Byez

::MELI::

Nice!!! such talent - though the structure did make it seem long and made me think twice avout reading it. I'm glad i did 5/5 =)

Great poem talent talent
awesome poem 5/5
love always
tabby