Comments : HER FiRST MiSTAKE...

  • 18 years ago

    by Roadrunner Chick

    I like the message and the meaning behind it.

  • 18 years ago

    by Cheyanne

    Wow that poem was excellent yet so sad well u did a gr8 job n i lyke ur use of wordz keep up tha gud work ur doin gr8!!!5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Lauren

    Hey seriously for real this poem is p.i.m.p. no joke. i like every single part of it from the begining to end. but...you're not planning on doing this are you? anyways greaaat job i love it.
    lauren

  • You shouldnt feel this way about a guy and you shouldnt put yourself through any kind of pain trust me..

  • 18 years ago

    by samantha

    OMG!! that was AWESOME no lie...but dont even think bout doin that..girl ur better than that...but awesome poem dont change a thing

  • 18 years ago

    by hidden_beauty

    I love this poem.

  • 18 years ago

    by BEAUTiiFUL|♥|TRAGEDY

    This is me MissInvisible, just saying, i absolutely love your poem, you are such a fantastic writer, && never let anyone tell you your not, because the proof is in this text. i love ya,
    XOX
    your new friend. XX

  • 18 years ago

    by emmajaynexo

    I really liked this poem.
    It shows how much hurt guys can cause.
    Keep up the great work.
    Hope to see more great poems.
    Emma x

  • 18 years ago

    by hurtincuzofhim

    Wow...that was great....dont eva do that tho....no guy is worth it....cuz guys can be total jerks...no offense 2 the nice ones lol...anyways keep up the good work

  • 18 years ago

    by TRAGiC BEAUTY

    IT IS GOOD! SO POWERFUL!

    x3----SHELBY

  • 18 years ago

    by writersxblock

    Aw thats amazing.. wow. Hey whered the idea cum from? ur a fave of myne! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Loruhh

    Its such a true poem
    Some peopel choose death if they cant have what they want...if they choose death then yeah, they must of REALLY been in love!!

    I hope this doesnt happen often =[ its sad

    makes me wonder how the guy would feel that made her do this!!

    5/5