My first Etheree

by Ashleigh Skye   Jan 25, 2006


Plush,
white fur,
soft to touch,
original,
created with care,
love flowing through each seem,
shiny eyes always watching,
always sitting there when I cry,
always managing to rescue me,
reminding me why I still try to fly.

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this is my first try so please be kind.

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  • 18 years ago

    by ||.SamanthA.||

    Beautifully written. the last two lines were my favourite!! yay!!! 5/5....i will have to try an etheree sometime...i'm sick of writing free-verse...very good first attempt! 5/5

    love,
    sam

  • 18 years ago

    by Ashley Van Eperen

    Haha sadly i'm not THAT advanced it writing it dif kinds of...idk...uh...stuff....lol i just write what comes to my mind, what i'm feeling, and how it comes out. i dont really worry about what type of poem it is, like sonnets and stuff... but i guess this is good lol. i dont exactly know how this kind of poem is supposed to be written.

  • 18 years ago

    by Allison

    It was ok thought you could add more to it. *4/5*

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