This poem is Great i dont know y it has such a low rating..and dont worry its not true me and my gf will never break up lol..i just felt like writin a sad poem thats all..great job on yours though, im lovin your work 5/5
ttyl sometime
PeAcE
~The Poet~

I can relate it is so easy for my brothers to hurt me worse then any guy could ever it is very good great job

Um..hunnie..no offence, but ur poem was kind a confusing although what you're saying is true...i just didn't get it...but of course, i'm a loser. so don't feel bad by what i say. i'm sure you have TONZ of other poems that are so much better. plus, EVERY writer, has a few messed up poems. i think you could have captured this feeling in a better since...idk...something that had...format...4/5

I liked your poem even though it kind walked in circles, well at least to me it did. Setting this aside though I think you are a good writer and that you have talent. *4/5*

Hey, that was pretty gud.. i lykd the idea, but i thot the rhyme scheme wasnt perfect throughout.. gr8 message, tho.. and so true, too!!
keep it up
take care
Nouna

I really liked it. the poem was just all over the place. but i liked it. keep up the good work.
Emma 4/5

Good message, try to write it in a constant poetry form and work on the flow. keep it up

I agree with everyone else it is a good poem and I get what you are trying to say its a good message its just kinda confusing to follow

It's good to think that you will never have a broken heart again...but the heart does what it wants to do!
otherwise, an awsum poem

Amazing job. i love how you wrote this and i love how you write your poems there very stylish i must say but anyway this poem was amazing once again. I like how you won't let him in because you don't want your heart broken again. I think every girl/guy who ever get there hearts broken don't want to let someone new in even though they might or might not fix your broken heart. keep it up. keep on writing. love always and forever.

I truly like it.
Though it's ironic, it sometimes happens that the beloved become responsible for the most loathed acts. Nice poem.

Wow brilliant such emotion - the flow wasnt perfect but with emotion like that I couldnt care less - well done 5/5 =)

WOW. This poem is really great. I agree with Dean, the flow wasn't perfect, but it was good. And also, I could care less about that too. the content owns. Anyways, that's an awesome poem. keep up the good work. umm I like your style of writing, I wish you would make longer poems.

Oh!

I don't really like the format.

but who cares?

So very sad and depressing. But I love when people can truly evoke that emotion. Love it!! Great job!!

Aw hun this is sad. I really like it tho

Oo that was such a great poem! =)

True that is sooooo true. i've been through that and its the worst of all pains...

Great poem!!

Thats very true!!!
our heart are always vulnerable to the ones we love... its cos we trust in them...
very true
keep it up!
i liked it alot

If I read this I would not think it was a poem unless I knew, it sounds more like something you'd put in the forum!!
idea is great, but how it's written and the word use brings irt down! 3/5

I can relate to this so well .
This is sad, and amazing . So much emotion .
This poem is so true .
..ღ__MiNDYY