Success/Failure (Diamante)

by HOLLY ARMER   Jan 25, 2006


Success
perseverance, motivation
leading, working, planning
powerful, diligent-weak, inadequate
procrastinating, faltering, losing
forfeit, incompetent
failure

**Diamante
Line 1:
one word
(subject/noun that is contrasting to line 7)

Line 2:
two words
(adjectives) that describe line 1

Line 3:
three words
(action verbs) that relate to line 1

Line 4:
four words (nouns)
first 2 words relate to line 1
last 2 words relate to line 7

Line 5:
three words
(action verbs) that relate to line 7

Line 6:
two words
(adjectives) that describe line 7

Line 7:
one word
( subject/noun that is contrasting to line 1)

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  • 18 years ago

    by JJ

    I just found out, this is my new favorite style...haha well done holly! excellent choice of words (am still working on mine :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Melissa

    Wow, this was amazingly done! Awesome choice of words, simply perfect! Great job!

  • 18 years ago

    by master of shadow

    Very interesting style and very effective.

    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Timothy r

    I dont know how you do it Holly, but this was another great way to write a poem, when i grow up, Iwanna write just like you. Love, Tim