Comments : I'm Sorry

  • 18 years ago

    by Lexie

    I really really loved this poem. Keep writing!

  • 18 years ago

    by Emily parsons

    This was beautiful
    very emotional
    xxxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Loulou

    Great poem i like it alot

    love always
    tabby

  • 18 years ago

    by J Lau

    This is lovely... well written and very sincere... If he haven't read it already, I hope that he gets the chance to read it one day.

  • 18 years ago

    by Brian King

    Hmm... it seemed a bit repetitive but you mantained authenticity, with interesting ways of asking forgiveness, i truly believed you were sorry

    Saying those things was the dumbest thing I've done
    All I want is for you to be happy
    So please just listen to what I have to say
    Then you never need to hear or see from me again

    ^ the greatly adds to me beleif of your sorrow many a time i have also just said my peace then let them never be bothered by me again. you really reach out to A) who you offended B) me because i can relate and C) ( i belive) other readers because it takes so much to admit you were wrong and then letting go