Comments : My screams grow faint

  • 18 years ago

    by TheGayPimp

    HEY SHAWTY WATS GOOD THANK YOU FOR SHOWIN LUV TO MY POEMS SORRY I HAVENT BEEN ON TO TELL U THANK U BUT IM STILL WORKING ON NEW PEOMS AND STUUF U ARE A VERY GOOD WRITER GLAD U PUT UR FEELINGS IN WRITING RATHER THAN CRAZY SHIT

  • 18 years ago

    by Robie Lincer

    Thats a good poem! very sad thou! i loved the part you wrote

    "I'm not safe in a tunnel
    I'm unsafe in my closet
    nowhere am i safe
    not even in my sleep"

    5/5 keep it up!