by XxXcrystalXcontagiousXxX Jan 26, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
I'm so sad and it hurts real bad it was like a knife cutting my troat and pushing in too deep. |
Okayy, first of all I want to say I liked your use of words. Your grammar was not very good, though. I'd go back and proof read and correct all of the mistakes. |
by AmberSherrellxxIve Been Sitting Here Trying To Find Myselfxx
May i have a razor blade kiss.It only makes the pain more intense yet this is my defense |
by dancer
Another great poem loved it............ |
***I loved this poem...it was full of hurt yet there was strength in it too...a beautiful poem! Keep Writing!*** |