Comments : I Lost my dad and this is the story

  • 18 years ago

    by Melissa

    I didnt rank u 5 for ur dad dieing its that u had the gutts to put it on here!! i think your dad would be very proud of u right now!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Melissa

    I didnt rank u 5 for ur dad dieing its that u had the gutts to put it on here!! i think your dad would be very proud of u right now!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Danielle

    Hey is this chelsea stevens? this is danielle rafferty! i really liked this poem... and to write it so every one can see it.. u must have guts.. so i cant wait to see what u come up with nexted..

  • 18 years ago

    by Chelsea

    Hey Chelsea- guess who???
    This poem is awsome i wish you were able to speak to me the way you do to paper! You are an AMAZING girl and have a lot to give....to start giving

  • 18 years ago

    by yessie

    Wow very sad you had me crying
    all in all it was very good

  • 18 years ago

    by Lauren

    Trust me i know what your going through,my dad didint die like that but it was something close, And it does take awhile for u to realize u wont ever see him again its been three going on four years since my dad and it still seems like yesterday...