Everything here is good poetry it's just kind of like maybe you could split it up into two different poems? Like take the last two stanzas and let that be part of one and then add onto the top stanza for the rest of this poem? I don't know if that makes sense lol, just a suggestion. This happens with my poetry all the time, hard for me to stick to one idea.

But it's still really good! =P And I really like the lonely valentines day idea. Tis' Brilliant.