Screaming pain

by manda   Jan 26, 2006


Him: I'm sorry for last night you know what I'm like and you know that i do love you. . . . i just don't want to loose you
me; loose me you lost me a long time ago, this fight just keeps going never ending
him: look i said I'm sorry now just forget about it

i run away i can't handle this fight any longer
he chases me

me: go away leave me alone i don't want to be with you anymore
him: I'll show you

he turns the corner
(BANG)
me: this fight is over
him: but i loved you
me: no i loved you but these bruises you make they turn into scares the times you hit me they hurt me still and the cuts i make after it!
him: i love you though
me:there will never be someone like you, i loved you and the pain i will never forget but you will never be back with me!

slowly he slips away and she cry, her tears are real and the pain is really but no longer will she feel, the hit's or the UN worthy ness that he made her life!

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  • 18 years ago

    by Steven

    I like how you choose to format your poem that way. It seems so much more real! It sucked me in and made me reflect on past similar experiences...way cool