by PURE HEART Jan 26, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
Zindagi ke mod par aapse milkar aisa laga, |
by Sourav
This poem ends well... Last stanza is the best... It gives your poem an extra edge. Keep it up! |
As Sonam said...i too loved the last stanza the most....simply pushed me back and forced me to read it again & again...just so powerful...so deep. |
by bOlly danCer
Aapse hi kuch armaan kuch umeedein lagar hum jiye |
Wow..that was deep...your hindi poems are amazingly beautiful and meaningful...i guess thats the benefit of writing in our mother tongue....the feelings could be expressed better....take care and keep writing... |