Wow..that was deep...your hindi poems are amazingly beautiful and meaningful...i guess thats the benefit of writing in our mother tongue....the feelings could be expressed better....take care and keep writing...

Aapse hi kuch armaan kuch umeedein lagar hum jiye
par aapko gawara na tha ki aap to unka mazaak banakar chal diye.....

wow amazing words used in this shiyari......this is really good i like it and its really kind of filled wit anger but love at the same time..........simply beautifull..........awsum wrk......keep it up.

~HUGS~

sonam

As Sonam said...i too loved the last stanza the most....simply pushed me back and forced me to read it again & again...just so powerful...so deep.

great work
take care and all the best

This poem ends well... Last stanza is the best... It gives your poem an extra edge. Keep it up!