OMG I love that poem! That was really really good! I think I'll read some more of yours!

~*~Elisha~*~

The structure of your words could almost evolve this poem into lyrics for a song, if you're interested! you've done an awsum job with this one!
luv em

Aye i love the second paragragph.....awsum work love dia mwaz xoxo

Hey this is a really good poem.. Keep up the great work!

Aww, very sweet! actually, it reminds me of my own writing.. :) keep up the excellent work!
jessy xox