What a deep poem. I really loved it. Great job! Keep up the work.

YAY!!! I loved it~!!! But I love all of your poetry, my beautiful Babe!!!
Love ya,
~*~Your Baby~*~

This screamed so much power in ur words...
i always wanted to write one something like this but wasnt quite able
u did it just right
i loved it.

U just simply thought mind of many womens here. i do know couple of examples myself and this is xactly how they feel...great write once again.

really loved this stanza..its so powerful

I was thinking about the feeling of not being able to move,
A feeling of not belonging, a pain you can't remove.
No one seems to see the fears you face all day,
And the feeling of being desperate, hoping he dies one day

take care and all the best dear
*just love ur poems*

What a deep poem I really loved it Excellent job of writing 5/5 sorry i didn't comment on all of them i did rate them :) ur an awesome writter :)

"the screaming for understanding,the praying for a friend'
THAT IS SO CRAZY CAUSE ON MY BIRTHDAY CANDLES..THATS CLOSE TO WHAT I WISHED FOR..
i love ur poems..im voting the a 5!..

Wonderful write dear, its so nice to find something from u to read after such a long time, really liked it and would look forward to find more soon

all the best and take care
5/5
Nitin

Hey i saw ur pichas on photobucket...and im guessing the guy that you usually draw is someone dear to you...ur art is beautiful..

Wow thats hecka girl dang i can toaley relate to your poems

Very sad Natasha dear
It really speaks pain
BUt life is a hardship
Hope evrything soon goes gr8 with you
God bless
wishes,
Rohan

In cases like this, death can be a release to those trapped in silence.