Nice work! It's a terrible feeling with impressive descriptions. Good imagery!

Well done on your latest poems, I found this one to be very deep, and something to which I can relate.
*VioletRaven*

Hey, thanks for the comment on my poem...I think it's great that you've tied to give it up before...I have my heart set on it so if I give in I won't only be letting myself down, I'll also be letting down all of those around me...Im sure you can do it if you want to.

Just cerious what is this person or thing trapped in?? it was good i liked it