Comments : She can't be saved until she's heard.

  • 18 years ago

    by StarStrukFiona

    Wow this poem is amazing and so sad. V. deep.
    You are a great poet, plz keep writing!
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  • 18 years ago

    by Loulou

    Wow an excellent excellent write you are really really good great job

    love always
    tabby

  • 18 years ago

    by master of shadow

    Powerful and deep peice, very well written too.

    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by sandra

    Great poem. I liked it a lot. Keep Writting. 5/5!!
    ~Sandra

  • 18 years ago

    by chloe

    Your poem is so well written. I wish i could write like that Love Chloéx

  • 18 years ago

    by Lyla

    Ok lets get a real comment on here. The rhyming is spectacular. Good scheme and exellent choice of words. Saying she was never saved because nobody ever heard her pain is wonderful, a great way to end it. You have such a talent, maybe you could try to apply it to another subject? There are other great depressing poems you can write that deal with other things besides cutting. Your style can be put to so many other wonderful things. Another great poem!

  • 18 years ago

    by ScarredSoul

    LOVE IT
    oh my goodness
    love it!!

  • 14 years ago

    by Ixora

    This poem just flows...ironically because of its subject. Still it describes a haunting beauty and a very valid point. Most people do not take the time to listen but only lecture. Great job!