When you left

by MBG   Jan 26, 2006


When you left i thought i would be sad

when you left i thought i never find anyone

when you left i thought i would never love again

when you left i thought i lose sleep

but....

when you left i was Happy

when you left i laughed more

when you left i found someone better

when you left i loved more

when you left i slept better.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Luke

    You Don't Need rhymes With This Because It Sounds Good Without them.. Very Nicely Done Keep It Up.

  • 18 years ago

    by iDeePanda

    I had 2 return the favor to you...and i think even i got competition...this was great!

  • 18 years ago

    by Switchblade89

    Very interesting poem...good job.

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