I gotta tell you, that the last line of that poem really stood out. Very creative, I love stuff like that. Keep up the good work.

Very good poem...you're slowly getting better...I remember reading your first ones and seeing some talent that needed to be tapped...obviously now..it has...well hope to read more.

Damn dude we miss you too...missing all the times we laughed and joked at each other....anyways, hope that you do come down so me and you and rob can chill...well laterz.

~Matt~

Ur really creative with ur poems. good job. i especially liked the last line of yours.