Afraid

by Emma   Jan 26, 2006


I see your face
Dark brown eyes
Your beauty lies
a mysterious, misunderstood
being is what you hide.
A dream is where
i see you like this
your at your brightest
no anger, or fear
lies in you yesterday.
You were truly happy
once I've seen it.
A moment that you
you didn't let last
you fall back into the
past of pain and fear.
Today you are afraid again but i knew a day when you weren't afraid of anything.

devoted to a friend

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  • 18 years ago

    by shannon

    Very very good poem..5/5 nice job

    thanks for sharing
    take care
    shannon

  • 18 years ago

    by Kaitlyn

    Nice. no wait, AMAZING. thw flow of it all was great. You should put it into stanzas. it would be great =] you have alot of talent.

    Katt.

  • 18 years ago

    by Sole

    Nice poem - but you could have tried to rhyme the whole way through - the first four lines are ABBC - Which could work well for the rest of the poem :) Hope this helps.

    Peace. [Sole]

  • 18 years ago

    by ~Fallen Angel~

    Really another 5 I love your writting style and this poem really spoke to me cause I know a friend like that...I would like to add you to my favorites if thats cool with you ( I always ask the author as a courtesy)

  • 18 years ago

    by Amanda

    That is a really great poem. Understand totally and I think you are a very good writer with lots of talent. Keep it up :)

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