Very beautiful 5/5

Ohh hun that was really good. keep writting gril. xoxo Rach

Wow, great poem. so much emotion. 5/5.

Jolly good, I know sorta where you're coming from here, well written :D

It's a great dedication to sincere friendship, witten very nicely.

Very well written

5/5

Great poem , i loved the flow of things and the way it was written. You are a great poet, keep it up and thanks for the comment! =D
Polly xXXx

And a good friend you are. Whoever you wrote this poem for is extremely luckly to have such a caring person as a friiend watching out for them. This poem says a lot about your character and the things are are important to you in your life. I love to read poems that give away things about the author because it is cool how their poems are truly a part of soul written on paper. Wonderful job, I hope your friend is okay.

-Tainted Mikochan

That is a really great poem. Understand totally and I think you are a very good writer with lots of talent. Keep it up :)

Really another 5 I love your writting style and this poem really spoke to me cause I know a friend like that...I would like to add you to my favorites if thats cool with you ( I always ask the author as a courtesy)

Nice poem - but you could have tried to rhyme the whole way through - the first four lines are ABBC - Which could work well for the rest of the poem :) Hope this helps.

Peace. [Sole]

Nice. no wait, AMAZING. thw flow of it all was great. You should put it into stanzas. it would be great =] you have alot of talent.

Katt.

Very very good poem..5/5 nice job

thanks for sharing
take care
shannon