He now stands alone

by karima   Jan 9, 2004


There's a road,
where a crash took place,
everyone was there,
now it's an empty space.

there was a girl,
and her mum,
as their souls seeped away,
their bodies went numb.

then the father,
stands there crying,
he now stands alone,
his mind is dying.

as the two watch,
from the sky,
they see that man,
continue to cry.

he can't stand it,
so he takes his life,
he wants to see ,
his daughter and wife.

but when he's gone,
his soul will rise,
but his decision ,
is still not wise

for some they think,
suicide is a sin,
he's made a deal,
he will not win.

as he rises up,
he sees their eye's,
he cannot reach them,
he hears their sighs.

as he falls,
deep down below,
the light of heaven,
he will now never know.

But from above,
their tears fall like rain,
now no-one understands,
why he felt such pain.

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  • 20 years ago

    by LeAnNe

    Hey! thanks for commenting on my poem! lol, I submitted it and i went into my poems like 2 minutes later and there was a comment! it was cool! lol. Wow though! i really liked this poem! most people write about people commiting suicide and then finally being able to see their loved ones who have passed but i like how you did something different. This was a really good poem, keep up the good work!
    *two thumbs up*
    ~LeAnNe

  • 20 years ago

    by original girly

    good poem..maybe you could add on to the end tho, it seems like it stops too quickly, it was still great, i gave you a 5