good poem..maybe you could add on to the end tho, it seems like it stops too quickly, it was still great, i gave you a 5

Hey! thanks for commenting on my poem! lol, I submitted it and i went into my poems like 2 minutes later and there was a comment! it was cool! lol. Wow though! i really liked this poem! most people write about people commiting suicide and then finally being able to see their loved ones who have passed but i like how you did something different. This was a really good poem, keep up the good work!
*two thumbs up*
~LeAnNe