This is incredibly written. You're so good at this.

Beautiful thoughts that flowed so perfectly. i love the message that your poem portrays.

god luck and peace
shobhana

Wonderdful penn, phenomenal job!!!

Wow...absolutely amazing!!! i love the message... and i especially love the first stanza. very deep. thanks for your comment, it means so much :D keep up the excellent work!
-xXx-

Awesome Work. You are very insightful on a lot of aspects.

Ps. THank for your comment it ment lots.

That was lovely! its a really uplifting poem. it was a bit confusing though, for your first stanza rhymed, yet the others didn't. i enjoyed the language used. it gave more cepth to the poem.

Ruby