Sometimes u have to tell someone how u feel about em, cos u may regret it if u dont.. anyway i loved ur poem, very beautiful :)

I can entirely relate. they say the hardest thing you will ever have to do is watch the one you love, love someone else, and i agree. it hurts.

I love the last line!! nice work!! gosh some guys just think they are God's gift to this world! sorry you have to go through this you deserve better!! keep up the good work!

I really like it nice job!! i love the last line its soo good!! you probably aknow it but if you don't check out the word to "be the girl" by aslyn!! i know how you are feeling my guy is with another girl and its killing me!! hang in there!! keep writing your good! comment back if you would!