Alone in this World

by Levi   Jan 27, 2006


I walk alone in this deserted place, no-one here, no-one here. My echo is the only thing that talks to me and my shadow is the only other being, the feeling I get in this haunting place takes it's toll on me.

I'm still walking with only one goal in mind, it's to find you, hold you and be with you. Deserted city streets that once were full but now left with nothing but the eery wind carrying haunting sounds as it goes by, chilling to the bone the feeling is something none have ever known.

I can't take much more of this walking in this dark abyss, take my soul, I give unto you, do with it want you want to, just get me outta this decimated place. Lifeless as I continue to walk, a light appears and covers all, I can't see blinded by it's intensity. Seen from the center a faded, blurred outline of an angel. It walks to-wards me, I feel week, my knees go limp, I fall to the ground all goes white...

I wake to the sounds that once filled the world, the chirping of birds and the laughs of children. My eyes open I'm lying in bed, I turn to my-side and see you there, I can't believe it my body fills with so much joy and happiness, it can't be explained. You awake and you smile at me my life is complete everything I ever wanted in you is here I'm so happy it can't be explained....

I'll love you forever until the end, be sure of that my darling one, now rest your head and go back to sleep.......

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  • 16 years ago

    by Kaila

    That was really adorable. I loved the whole bad dream, waking up into a lovely morning idea. It was really cutee!
    Critisism:
    I think for a better flow and understanding of words you should make your stanzas more structured for example:
    the flower was beautiful, i love it so much:(

    The flower was beautiful
    I love it so much:)
    If that little lesson made any sence to you at all hehe

    Otherwise this poem used great vocabulary and imagery and I enjoyed it
    5/5

  • I love this the feeling of it! keep this great work up

  • 18 years ago

    by sarah

    U r really good man 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by loenly angel

    Dam u good

  • 18 years ago

    by Aimee

    Omg levi that was great. i mean realli realli great. i loved it. keep writing hun.
    take care
    Aimee