Heylo.
Great word usage.
I liked the idea behind the poem.
Well done xD

Hey levi
this poem is gr8 it's really something well they're betta then mine neways well betta go bye (by the way i gave it 5/5)

~*~Kiah~*~

Wow it reallt makes u think about the meanings of it and its incredablde

Omg levi that was great. i mean realli realli great. i loved it. keep writing hun.
take care
Aimee

Dam u good

U r really good man 5/5

I love this the feeling of it! keep this great work up

That was really adorable. I loved the whole bad dream, waking up into a lovely morning idea. It was really cutee!
Critisism:
I think for a better flow and understanding of words you should make your stanzas more structured for example:
the flower was beautiful, i love it so much:(

The flower was beautiful
I love it so much:)
If that little lesson made any sence to you at all hehe

Otherwise this poem used great vocabulary and imagery and I enjoyed it
5/5