by Olliver Kahle Jan 27, 2006
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
Fallen angel from the sky, sadder than the last goodbye, |
by Whitney
You did an amazing job on this and the emotion portrayed made it easy to relate to so once again great job keep it up! |
Its a really good poem! i'm loving the strong imagery you've created there, but i think that the rhyme makes it a bit sing-songy which doesnt match the context of the poem. |