Goodbye

by Miss Pipp   Jan 27, 2006


See this knife...
see this wrist...
see the pool of blood on the floor...
see me fall...
hear my call...
hear me say goodbye to you all...

~my suicide poem~ if you rate and comment i always return the favour

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  • 17 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    Really short but so powerful with the words excellent write 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Bertha

    I really hope you havent actually come through with anything about this poem. trust me- i have DEFINITELY thought about this way too many times. but you need to find something worth living for. and i think theres gotta be a lot. you just need to realize it.

  • 18 years ago

    by Adriana

    Wow! Very strong poem..but good

  • 18 years ago

    by NothingGoldCanStay

    Hey, Loved it. Even though it was short it gave the massage that you were sending out.

    5/5
    -Cassandra
    A.k.A *Nothing-Gold-Can-Stay*

  • 18 years ago

    by ├Truely_Spoken┤

    Awww, why so sad???
    You need to be cheered up, you can always talk to me :)