O_o O...K...

Uh.. If you really feel that way, maybe instead you should try to talk to some one... Life is given to you for a reason, not to throw it away whenever you please amigo... I'm here if you need a shoulder to cry on...

Expressive...

really hope you didnt really feel this way, and if you did i hope that things are improving for you now

I like this even though it is short it is really dark but very good

great job

5/5
tabby

Very dark but good job..

This poem, although very short, is very well tied together.

Now if you truly feel this way you should talk to someone for I myself know what such sadness feels like.

5/5

West

Hey like i said,

Death isn't the end of life
It just causes pain
for the ones who love you most

Dis was short but i loved it....love dia mwaz xoxo

Great job it was short but Sooo good it just got straight to the point of it loved it!!! 5/5 keep up the good work and as always keep writting

~!*FallenTears~!*
~!*Meaghen~!*

Short and simple but really good.
pure feelings.
really nice

Awww, why so sad???
You need to be cheered up, you can always talk to me :)

Hey, Loved it. Even though it was short it gave the massage that you were sending out.

5/5
-Cassandra
A.k.A *Nothing-Gold-Can-Stay*

Wow! Very strong poem..but good

I really hope you havent actually come through with anything about this poem. trust me- i have DEFINITELY thought about this way too many times. but you need to find something worth living for. and i think theres gotta be a lot. you just need to realize it.

Really short but so powerful with the words excellent write 5/5